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PostSubject: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:04 pm

An MB Horror Story ~ Recap

While chilling at Megabuddies HQ, Gbleek is playing a game called Gbleek's Magical Pony Adventure on his N64 and begins to experience trouble overcoming a certain part of it. Through a series of unfortunate mishaps stemming from asking Crimson, the MB leader who thinks that she's a vampire, for help in beating his treasured game, the game and video game console wind up being devoured by Evul, Crimson's creepy mutant pet.

All hope seems lost until Cajun jumps into the room with the brilliant idea that they go to the fabled store of Wal-Mart, a place guaranteed to always have lower prices than those of their competitors, to find a replacement copy of Gbleek's video game. His friends agree and they set off to find the store.

At Wal-Mart, everything seems normal until some Wal-Mart employees try to attack Gbleek after he gets his game as Crimson screams for him to look behind him. She intervenes, saving him, and she and her friends begin battling employees with whatever they can find ranging from bargain bin DVDs to action figures.

The employees pursue them throughout the store, but Cajun is swamped with employees and the situation looks grim for Gbleek and Crimson. Crimson, in a flash of genius, uses her awesomeness to god mode, save Cajun and fend off the attacking mob of employees. The Wal-Mart employees counter this attack by alerting Crimson's mother of her presence in the store, who unknown to the group of friends happened to be shopping in the store as well.

Crimson's mother rushes to the scene and Crimson realizes to her horror that her god mode skills have no effect on her parent. The Megabuddies leader is quickly subdued and taken prisoner. The heroic leader pleads with her friends for them to leave her behind and save themselves, but thinking quickly Cajun figures out Crimson's mom's weakness and screams that there's a sale going on in another part of the store. The woman releases her daughter and runs off maniacally to find the sale product as Crimson is reunited with her friends.

The three MBs immediately leave Wal-Mart with no plans on ever returning to the ferociously evil store.


An MB Horror Story 2: Second Shift ~ Recap

(INCOMPLETE, INCOMPLETE, INCOMPLETE)

Cajun, Crimson and Gbleek return to the Megabuddies base and realize to their horror that they need to return to the evil store, only now remembering that Evul ate their copy of Gbleek's Magical Pony Adventure and their N64. After some arguing, they prepare for their new mission by donning costumes of Banjo, Kazooie and Bozzeye the mole from the Banjo-Kazooie video game series. They also discover that their friend Nathan has been consumed by Evul, but choose to act like they can not hear his cries for help and leave to go buy their N64.

The friends arrive at the store and are baffled to discover that it no longer exists. Instead, a Wal-Mart Supercenter has replaced it in the shopping center across the street. The three MBs use their disguises to sneak back into the store without being recognized by the unfriendly employees with a strange and pointless beef against them. However, an unexpected problem arises when a lonely greeter giving out poisoned candy tries to greet Gbleek, greeters, despite being elderly, are evil like all Wal-Mart employees. Crimson and Cajun defend Gbleek and render the greeter unconscious, smoothly hiding him in a locked bathroom.

Upon exiting the bathroom, the group is spotted by a group of bratty and annoying youngsters who rush to the costumed heroes for various reasons, including hugging them and beating them up among others. The MBs shake them off, and Crimson uses her awesomeness to make her Kazooie suit fly away from the scene, carrying the three to an even deadlier location. While originally planning on just flying to the video game department of the store, the MBs realize that there will be even more annoying kids there hogging the demo video game consoles and instead land in the clothing section.

The MBs hide under clothes racks and come up with a new back up plan to cut the store's power, kill security cams, and give them time to work under the cover of darkness to get their N64 and leave safely unnoticed. Before they can hammer out their plan concretely, a patrol of employees walks by and the trio bails out from under the clothes racks, bumping into Nathan and Belbell in the process. (Nathan having been rescued by Belbell back at MB HQ and being forced to shop with Belbell unhappily in gratitude) The MBs urge the two to join them as they flee into the huge warehouse sized, off-limits to customers, employees only, stockroom of the store.

The employees struggle to get through the door to the backroom for a few minutes as the MBs struggle to keep the doors shut, eventually barricading the doors with tons of heavy giant boxes. Trapped, but safe, for now, the team decides to split up in the backroom to explore their surroundings. While Crimson guards the door and babysits the hopeless couple, Cajun and Gbleek walk off to search for a way to kill the power and to see if they can find anything useful to help them survive.





An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime

Starring

Mega10 (Crimson)
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:15 pm

For freedom. For friendship. For the lulz. This is the story of the Megabuddies.

Prologue: Miracle or Mistake?

A snazzy looking and well groomed man dressed in business attire sat silently in a Wal-Mart office in the chain’s Arkansas headquarters with the lights dimmed. As he chomped on a lit cigar, smoke puffing up into the air from the orange stub on the end of it, a less important looking person knocked on his office door.

“Come in…” coughed the man in a very low voice.

The man’s guest opened the door and reached his hand out to flip the light switch.

No.” interrupted the man at the desk. “Leave it on. I like it like that…” he looked at the man standing in front of his desk, waiting to be motioned to sit down. Instead of politely asking him his business and requesting he make himself comfortable, he instead decided to get right to business. “What is it?”

“Have you seen CNN lately?” inquired the man to his superior.

“Haven’t seen it in a while, why?”

The quiet man tossed several folders he had brought with him onto his boss’s wooden desk. He put his hand on the table and spread them apart.

“You need to have a look at these, sir.” said the man’s lackey. “Something happened in the last few days, and we thought you’d be interested.”

The boss stared at the series of manila folders. Each folder had the word ‘Classified’ on their covers in big red letters. He looked at his lackey’s face for a few seconds, chewing on the end of his cigar before reaching for one of the items strewn all over his desk.

Opening the folder he had grabbed, the boss gasped in surprise. “When was this taken?” He stared at a picture of a giant crater in the middle of a town, the remnants of what had been one of their newest stores, one which had looked to be one of the most profitable locations that they had ever built upon.

“Two days ago. That’s a still from a news segment that was shown on CNN recently.” informed the faithful minion.

What could have done this to our store…” asked the manager rhetorically.

“We’re not sure, but we think it has something to do with what you’ll see in the photographs faxed to us from the store’s manager before the store was mysteriously scraped off the face of the Earth, sir.” he pointed at a particular folder in particular.

The man put the folder he was holding down and opened the folder he was encouraged to look at. His eyes widened and he took the cigar out of his mouth. “Holy mother of God… What is it…?”

The folder had several pictures of a humanoid red fox creature cuffed to a chair. It’s captors had clearly clothed it after finding it in the wild, or wherever the hell it had come from. The animal looked frightened and absolutely deadly. There seemed to be a sort of human quality of intelligence in the creature because it’s eyes didn’t seem void of thought.

“We don’t know sir.”

The boss read a note faxed with the photos. “Found in store running around with group of people who threatened our store's existence. Creature displays heightened reflexes, extreme aggression, abnormal strength, some sort of regenerative molecular ability, acute sense of smell and hearing, and is very athletic and intelligent. Very dangerous. Many men lost capturing it. Approach with extreme caution.”

“We could use this thing.” The boss commented while putting the cigar back into his mouth. “Looks like a mean son of a bitch…” He stared at the creature’s fangs in a photograph, fangs being bared at whoever the photographer of the picture had been.

“I absolutely agree. As soon as this came in we rushed to tell you.”

“I can’t help but ask myself… Is this God’s biggest mistake or his biggest miracle?” he smiled at the picture of the fox creature. “Either way… he’s welcome to join our Wal-Mart family… He has the perfect qualities we’re looking for in our newest job opening.” He laughed to himself and grinned smugly. “My dear friend, I think the time is now. You know what to do. Inform the others. I want that creature in my hands dead or alive… Search the surrounding area and town. It’s time he came home. His future family will soon be his only family… Figure out whoever he came to the store with, find them and kill them all.”

“I was hoping you’d say that.” said the employee, smirking evilly. He nodded and left the room.

End of Prologue

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:27 pm

FIRST!

:O Mean person is mean

Brad! Very Happy

This doesn't look good D: Good prologue


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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:27 pm

PLOT! EXPOSITION! duuuur

BRAD! D: dislike

MORE NAO. pleaaaase?

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:39 am

Yay prologue. Very Happy Didn't need to wait long after the other one ended. *is glad* OOOOooo mysterious beginning. =O AHA. A Wal-mart exec perhaps?
=O Brad. Yay. Very Happy Wow the exec is mean, kill whoever brought it to the store. xD I understand it, but not cool.

Very cool prologue. =O Really starts getting everything set up! Nice job. xD

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Wed Jul 21, 2010 1:49 am

Thanks you guys. I like

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:55 pm

*just now found this* Why didn't I see this earlier?! D=

Oh no, Wal-Mart headquarters has discovered us!

They want Brad, of course. Why didn't I think about the manager informing his superiors about Brad? How could I miss THAT?!
Brad supposedly died in Wal-mart 2. Either they don't know that or he's still alive. Unless they intend to capture the dead body and revive it.

Wow, this guy is much nicer with his employees. But I get the feeling he isn't going to be as nice to us MBs. Especially considering what we did to his store.

ZF approves of this prolouge, and demands Act/Chapter1 immediatly!
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:40 pm

THANKS ZF. =3

And no, they don't know what became of the MBs and the silly fox creature, they just know he exist/ed and that even if he's dead he could be useful. Go investigate the Wal-Mart incident and bring back him dead or alive. c:

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:46 pm

Is deh fox Brad or summat? I didn't finish the first story. Can\\'t Believe it
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:47 am

The fox is Brad. He has an origin story in the second story. lulz I\'m happy

He's frolicking at the traveling carnival in town, when he's kidnapped by the freak-show because they need one more person to complete their sideshow. You did what? They inject him with a syringe filled with mystery stuff, anyway he turns into some sort of humanoid fox thing, they want him to be a Wolf Man. T_T

He kills his captors and escapes and has yet to find a cure for his condition. dizzy

Anyway as a result of his condition for the lolz in the story he has gained a healing ability like wolverine and enhanced abilities like strength and hearing. xP He also can now contact this strange platypus called Phil, who claims to be his spirit guide and who pops up at randomly inconvenient times to offer his advice. lulz

I scary

My story is weird on purpose. lol

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:41 pm

I wantz new chapter pleaaaase?
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:11 am

This story is going to be awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:58 pm

To read or not to read. lol
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:59 pm

READ. Rage face

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:03 pm

For friendship. For humanity. For the lulz. This is the story of the Megabuddies.

Chapter 1: A Glorious New Transport

It had been about two weeks since the Wal-Mart Incident and the MBs had yet to have their celebratory feast for a successful mission. There was just too much to be done. There was an adminmobile to repair. The salvage mission at the crash site of their lost chopper from which they were still trying to find the body of their deceased buddy, Brad was also one of the many things that they had been keeping themselves busy with. They hadn’t even had any time to play their new N64. Upon their return to their base it had been tossed in a closet for safekeeping where it sits at this very moment gathering dust, still mint in box.

The MBs were worn out from all the hard work they had been doing lately, and finally felt that they had mourned their friends at least long enough to finally celebrate their victory.
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It was night now and the Megabuddies were all sitting outside on benches waiting at a bus stop. It was raining, very cold and windy and the group of friends was quite improperly dressed for the kind of weather they were experiencing. The remaining MBs Crimson, Cajun, Simian, T_L, ZF, Soma, Gbleek, Laclipsey and Geo were all dressed up in extremely luxurious pricey tuxes and dresses. They looked as if they were getting ready to attend a wedding.

The bus stop wasn’t covered, so the pouring rain was drenching on them as they sat bored doing nothing as they waited for the bus to show up. T_L sat next to ZF on a bench and pulled out a paper bag that he had brought with him. He held it up to his mouth and took a few sips to warm himself up.

Refreshing.” thought T_L. “Almost as good as bacon…”

ZF looked horrified at him and tried to take away the booze. “You’ve had enough for today…”

T_L growled at him like a rabid dog though and slapped him hard in the face with his free hand. T_L glared at him bitterly and then scooted over closer to Crimson.

The public bus turned around the corner nearby and began slowing down as it neared the bus stop.

“BUS!!!” shouted Gbleek hopping up and down. “BUS, BUS, BUS, BUS, BUS, BUS, BUS, BUS!!!” It seemed to be the only word he knew. He chanted it incessantly as the bus slowly came to a halt in front of the bus stop. He began running for the bus and ran into the door before it had time to fully open. He fell down into a gigantic muddy puddle. “Aw man, my tux! This is your fault girlfriend stealer!” he hissed coldly at ZF.

ZF blinked and simply shuffled after the other MBs as they got on board the bus and paid their bus far.

DON’T IGNORE ME, *****.” howled Gbleek. "YOU KNOW THIS IS YOUR FAULT. IF YOU HADN'T STOLEN MY GIRL I'D HAVE BEEN MORE FOCUSED, THAT WAY I COULD IMPRESS HER AND NOT EMBARRASS MYSELF DOING SOMETHING ****ING STUPID, YOU DOLT."

People inside the bus stared outside their windows frightened. Was that insane kid really going to get on the bus with them?

Gbleek got up and pushed T_L out of his way, grabbing his wallet from him as he did so. T_L stepped on board after everyone else had sat down and realized he didn’t have his wallet on his person. He groaned and closed his eyes for a few seconds stressed, clicked his tongue once and then reopened his eyes.

T_L looked at the bus driver, a big grumpy looking fat black man with lots of facial hair who needed to shower more often. He reeked badly. “Hey, can you wait here for a minute? I think I forgot my wallet at home. It won’t take me that long if I run.”

The bus driver stared at T_L and laughed. He seemed nice enough. T_L laughed as well. The man stopped laughing. T_L didn’t.

“Are you getting on the bus or not kid? I haven’t got all day. Either pay up now or get the hell off my bus. Bus rides aren’t free.” said the man coldly.

Somewhere in the back of the bus, Gbleek was covering his mouth trying to stifle his laughter. He loved this. Simian stared at him strangely.

“Please sir, I just need a minute… I want to get on the bus…”

“Do you have money or not?” asked the driver.

“Yes, but it’s at home…”

The driver squinted at him, got out of his seat, picked up T_L and threw him out into a muddy puddle on the sidewalk. Brown water splashed all over T_L’s clean white undershirt. He felt like crying. The drive closed the doors and began driving off without any feelings of remorse.

T_L took out his bottle of booze and angrily hurled it at the side of the bus as it drove away. It shattered on the hard metal surface of the vehicle. He held his head up high and stood back up in the pouring rain watching it drive off. He frowned a bit and turned around to walk back to the MB headquarters.

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HEY! You can’t do that to my friend!” shouted Cajun pissed.

“Just did kid.” cackled the man.

Gbleek pressed his face against the window near him and made stupid faces at T_L.

“Turn around and get our comrade, human. He is an asset of this mission. You do not understand our mission’s importance and you never will.” Crimson bickered. She began turning red enraged.

“Ha. Yeah right. Make me.”

“Ok.” said Soma. “We can do that.”

“New mission objective!” blurted Crimson ecstatically.

HIJACK THE BUS! GOT IT!” finished Simian, interrupting her before his commander could finish what she was trying to say.

The people on the bus began screaming in terror. Terrorists on board! They should have known! They began fighting to get off the bus. Some even tried to attack the MBs, but the epic MBs had too much skill. They soon gave up and resumed fighting over the emergency exits. The bus driver paid no attention, he simply whistled and continued driving along.

“NO, NO, NO.” screamed Crimson. “Not cool, duckling. See what you just did? You’re supposed to say COMMANDEERING. It sounds a lot less sinister! Police say it so people don’t freak out!”

Simian shrugged embarrassed.
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Almost as soon as T_L turned around the bus suddenly swerved into a power pole, knocking it over and into a nearby building. Other cars in the area swerved around the bus trying to avoid it and the people that were jumping out the emergency exits on the bus running away from the scene terrified for their lives. The live wires from the dislodged power pole dangled around in the air sending bright yellow and orange sparks flying. The bus door opened and the bus driver was pushed out of the bus by Cajun and Laclipsey.

“Mah bus! Gimme back my bus!” gasped the driver.

“Your vehicle has been commandeered for official MB usage, citizen. It shall be returned at some point naturally, we are not thieves after all, but we can’t guarantee in what condition. Oh yeah…” said Crimson. “I’m driving!” said Crimson giddily. She sat down in the chair and closed the door in the driver’s face before he could get back on.

“GO, GO, GO!” hollered Simian.

“I need you guys to be my eyes! I can’t see in this weather.” The heroic leader reversed the bus and began driving it down the sidewalk, knocking over garbage cans and obliterating mailboxes. “How am I doing you guys?”

“You’re good… You’re good… You’re good… You’re good… You’re good…” said Simian and ZF staring out the windows.

Oh no! The bus driver! He’s chasing the bus!” gasped Soma.

The MBs not spotting for Crimson stared at the bulky figure running, seemingly in pain, for them in the headlights of the bus. The man began slowing down, he was much too fat and out of shape to have a good cardio.

“Oh wait, never mind.” said Soma smiling.

“Can you see T_L?” asked Crimson.

“No.” said both Simian and ZF.

YES!!! STOP STOP STOP!!!” panicked Cajun.

Crimson stomped her foot on the brake and opened the doors.

The sulking T_L was walking along the sidewalk, when having a strange feeling that something was amiss, stopped where he was and turned around. His jaw dropped as he saw his friends waving stupidly.

“You guys… You… you came back for me…” said T_L touched, his voice cracking. He got on board the bus. “Hey where is everybody? Oh…”

“Yeah, I couldn’t leave my duckling alone in the rain. There isn’t even free bread for you to feast on in the yard.” said Crimson.

“I love you guys so much…” whispered T_L, his eyes glistening with happiness and tears. "I'd do anything for you guys."

Really?” asked ZF. “You’ll really go sober for us, bro?”

T_L stood where he was looking at his friends, all quiet and waiting for his answer. He knew the answer. He’d be honest with them. He couldn’t lie to them.

**** no.” grunted T_L as he sat down in a seat and claimed it as his own, stretching out his legs. He shivered uncontrollably as the wet clothes he had on hugged his body.

Everyone was quiet for a minute as they accepted T_L’s response. Suddenly the bus driver stuck his front half through the doors. Everybody screamed in pure terror.

Aaagh!!!” screamed everyone.

Cajun kicked his head several times before he could get in so that he was outside the vehicle. “Get the doors!”

Crimson pulled the lever and the doors shut. The naturally upset bus driver continued to beat the glass door as hard as he could with his fist. “NEXT STOP, A FINE FAMILY ESTABLISHMENT!” She stepped on the gas and began driving recklessly down the street as everybody cheered.

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:08 pm

FIRST COMMENT. Ooo

I gots rescued by mah fwiends. Love

Stupid ZF asks stupid questions. You did what?

Yay FINE FAMILY ESTABLISHMENT. duuuur

Do I get my wallet back when Gbleek dies? Not amused

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:14 pm

YES!!! You'll get it back. :3

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:17 pm

Yay I love it more That is all. Good Chapter Razz
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:46 pm

My comment is better than yours. I\'m not impressed

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:04 am

I agree with T_L. lol

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Fri Aug 06, 2010 11:10 am

“Ha. Yeah right. Make me.”

“Ok.” said Soma. “We can do that.”

“New mission objective!” blurted Crimson ecstatically.

That made me laugh XD

Lol, stupid questions.

"You're good, you're good, you're good, you're good." XDXD

Lol, Gbleek is whiney. And a thief. XP

lol, inappropriate clothes for the situation XD

And finally; Caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaake.
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:36 pm

I like ZF's comment best now. duuuur

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:28 pm

Perfect. Ooo
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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:35 pm

Really? XP

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PostSubject: Re: An MB Horror Story 3: Triple Overtime   Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:45 am

Even though there is a significant lack of me, I find this to be weally funny :3
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